Sunday, April 12, 2015

Proofreaders Needed


The antecedent (or word it stands for) of their is officer. Officer is singular; therefore, their will not work since it is plural. The author likely used the plural form because it is gender neutral. If the author didn't know whether the officer were male or female, there were two options. One would be to write his or her.  Another option would be to choose his. I would have chosen the latter. 


Welcome



Naval
should be nasal. Breath should be breathe. 


 

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