I found this sign today while at a volleyball tournament. I've identified five errors. The first error is picky and not considered an error by many people. There's a preposition without an object. Second is a comma splice. The two sentences(independent clauses) are joined by a comma only. Third, is an error in subject/verb agreement. While "Wings" does end in an -s, it is singular if the team is working as one unit. The author uses a singular and a plural verb with this singular subject. The sentence should read, "[T]he Wings was founded...and has had...." The comma in this sentence is not needed. The final error is the ommission of a word.
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