1. A comma should precede the coordinating conjunction "but" since it is connecting two independent clauses. 2. The "i" in "I'm" should be capitalized. 3. There is a plural/compound subject; therefore, the verb should be the word are not the word is. 4. A comma isn't enough glue to put two independent clauses together. This comma should be a period or semicolon. 5. "Because" should not be capitalized. #nomadsnonsense #grammarfails
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