Showing posts with label Fox 16. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Fox 16. Show all posts

Friday, June 26, 2015

Where?

The phrase "in custody" is misplaced. As written, the man shot his girlfriend while she was in custody. The intended meaning is that he is in custody because he shot his girlfriend. 

Thursday, October 17, 2013

Oh, Fox 16!

Alcohol is misspelled. The classier, British spelling of theatre seems inappropriate, as well. 

Monday, November 21, 2011