This list is not parallel. The first and last are sentences. The middle one is not. The most glaring errors are in the middle group of words. "Wraping" should be wrapping. "Nice" should be nicely because it is an adverb which tells how. "Nice" is an adjective. "Nicely" is an adverb.
As for the third line, I'm not sure that "temps" can plan anything. The personification seems ridiculous in this context.
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