This sentence is a comma splice. Two independent clauses may be joined by a comma and a coordinating conjunction. These two independent clauses are joined by a comma and a conjunctive adverb. A conjunctive adverb does not have the power of a coordinating conjunction. The simple fix for this sentence is to add a semicolon before the conjunctive adverb, however.
This is from the Bryant Cafe in Bryant, Arkansas.
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