It was the incorrect use of "it's" that I first noted. After clicking on the link to read more, many more issues became obvious. All of the circled commas are unnecessary. The commas before "but" are not needed because the words following "but" do not form an independent clause. The "is no stranger" phrases are not only redundant but also cliche. The phrase should be omitted completely. The comma before "while" is unnecessary because a comma should not precede a dependent clause.
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