This is from the Facebook page of a small-town police department competing with a neighboring police department's Facebook page. Both pages seek to report the work of the police each day. The most glaring error on the page is the use of Salt BOWEL instead of Salt Bowl. There should be a comma after well, an additional period after the ellipsis or no ellipsis at all, a comma after the introductory clause ending with Salt Bowel, a period between twist and they.
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