Thanks to a Facebook friend for the link to this article. The most glaring mistake is that according to this headline, the suspects were sleeping (napped) rather than captured (nabbed). I believe they arrested TWO suspects, not TO suspects. Furthermore, the department HAS arrested, not HAVE arrested. The victim's name should be punctuated differently, either with a comma after the name as well as before or with no commas. The word WHEN should be inserted after MOTHER. I didn't even post the whole article!!
Oh, Bryant News, you DO need a proofreader.
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