The subject of the headline is "KIDS" and the verb is "IS." This subject and verb do not agree. "IS" should be "ARE." I don't think that the colon is necessary in the headline either. A comma would work in its place. Often, a colon in a headline means that a person has said something that is being quoted.
Thursday, July 23, 2009
Murry's Dinner Playhouse E-mail Mistake
The subject of the headline is "KIDS" and the verb is "IS." This subject and verb do not agree. "IS" should be "ARE." I don't think that the colon is necessary in the headline either. A comma would work in its place. Often, a colon in a headline means that a person has said something that is being quoted.
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