First of all, typing in all capital letters does not provide emphasis, only confusion. There should be a comma after "By all means." "Steady" should be "steadily" because an adverb is necessary.
The apostrophe in the first line is unnecessary. Buffet is supposed to be plural, not possessive. "Each person" is singular. "They" is plural. "They" should be singular so as to agree with "each person." "They are" should be "he/she is."
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