"Vericose" should be "varicose."
The most glaring mistake is the apostrophe in the word "Tuesday's" and the apostrophe in "Saturday's." Because Tuesday nor Saturday does not own or possess anything, it should be written "Tuesdays" and "Saturdays."Capitalization rules are a bit different in advertisements, but consistency is still important. The titles of the classes are sometimes capitalized in this ad and sometimes not. There is no good reason for this inconsistency. Also, the times are written as "pm" in one class, as "p" in the next class, and with no abbreviation in the last class.
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