Comma Splice

This comma should be a period or a semicolon since it joins two independent clauses. In other words, if each part can stand on its own, a comma cannot join them.

Full Moon

The full moon doesn't scare me as much as this apostrophe error.

Brake versus Break

Brake means to stop or the objects you use to stop. Break means to separate into pieces. These words are not interchangeable.

Every Day versus Everyday

Use "everyday" when using an adjective. Use "every day" when you could also say "each day." Example: Put on your everyday clothes. I wear these clothes every day.

Quotation Marks Do Not Add Emphasis

No quotation marks are needed. Quotation marks do not add emphasis.

Surrendered

Triple

Triple

Deuces

Hornets

I'm guessing this is on the clearance rack.

Cutting Homelessness

This sounds illegal and painful.

Explicit vs. Expletive

Announced

Sergeant

Sergeant should be spelled correctly and not capitalized in this context.

Companys and Companies

Change the -y to -i and add -es.

Offenses