There should be an apostrophe in "Womens." Women is plural; therefore, the -s is needed to show possession. Notice that "Ladies'" is possessive. Where is the parallelism, Wal-Mart?
"Restroom" should not be capitalized. Notice the penciled in -s after "need." The wording is quite confusing in the introductory subordinate clause in the first sentence. The word "Please" should not be capitalized. There should be a comma after "issue." Whew!
Www.APlusArkansas.com seeks to improve education in Arkansas. (A noble effort, indeed!) Ironically, there were at least two grammatical errors in their flyer. "Less" should be "Fewer."
There is a subject-verb agreement problem in the first bulleted line. The subject of the first sentence is "one." Its verb is "are." It is the prepositional phrase "in three" that causes the confusion. It should read, "Fewer than one in three Arkansas students is proficient...."
The antecedent of "they" is "person." Person is singular. They is plural. This is a disagreement. The sentence should read, "A developing story out of Little Rock Sunday night has one person claiming he was shot."
Oh, Jahna's, the name of your city is Hot Springs; therefore, when making the name of your city possessive, you should add the apostrophe after the -s. (There are two schools of thought as to whether or not there should be an -s after the apostrophe: Hot Springs' or Hot Springs's)
There are two problems with the use of the word "there" in this post. First, the antecedent for the word is "parent." Parent is singular, meaning that the pronoun used in its place should also be singular. Second, the speaker intends to use the gender neutral (but plural) word "their." In place of "there" the speaker should have used "his" or "her." Better yet, is the option to change "parent" to "parents." Then, "their" will work.
Thanks to Robin for this one. The apostrophe in the name of the restaurant is correct. The apostrophes in the red headings are not correct. The writer intended to show that there are multiple appetizers, Italian dinners, and salad entrees.
